tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8821350472422810239.post2236646336756345115..comments2023-05-19T08:51:23.931-06:00Comments on Smartphone Shakespeare: Brett's Annotated Bibliography (1)Gideonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13328578010572353558noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8821350472422810239.post-60356627912735872082016-11-15T09:49:18.968-07:002016-11-15T09:49:18.968-07:00I second Karee's suggestion of "Swipe Rig...I second Karee's suggestion of "Swipe Right for Shakespeare:" Milton and Shakespeare's Characters in Media." Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01953191244199998331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8821350472422810239.post-77969403100016294852016-11-15T09:46:47.008-07:002016-11-15T09:46:47.008-07:00I agree with both Karee and Professor Burton's...I agree with both Karee and Professor Burton's comments. The claim needs to divide the audience and capture their attentionKevin Dormanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11741301834210005511noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8821350472422810239.post-11901828377765696622016-11-15T09:01:59.342-07:002016-11-15T09:01:59.342-07:00Some good suggestions from Karee on the title. Rig...Some good suggestions from Karee on the title. Right now you have your comparison set up well and a strategy for the development, but as with all comparison claims you'll need to bring in the "so what?" element. How does seeing the comparison affect our understanding of either work? How is one a foil to the other? You'll need a claim with more of an edge.Gideon Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08282494104976426309noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8821350472422810239.post-48569592250338888382016-11-14T22:39:44.477-07:002016-11-14T22:39:44.477-07:00Title suggestions: "Swipe Right for Shakespea...Title suggestions: "Swipe Right for Shakespeare," "A True Character Hidden by Media," "The Power of an Image." Personally I like the first suggestion, but if you need a more serious take maybe a combination of the two of ours? "Swipe Right for Shakespeare: Milton and Shakespeare's Characters in Media" or something like that.Kareehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04580453976973119190noreply@blogger.com