tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8821350472422810239.post4375440196306410902..comments2023-05-19T08:51:23.931-06:00Comments on Smartphone Shakespeare: Sam's Draft SonnetGideonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13328578010572353558noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8821350472422810239.post-63971365063758824132016-09-13T09:06:08.300-06:002016-09-13T09:06:08.300-06:00I agree with Kevin on the first two lines having 1...I agree with Kevin on the first two lines having 11 syllables. However, I really like the story of this so just fixing that up should make everything great. Great poem!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01563413943946148084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8821350472422810239.post-29155705995243604322016-09-12T22:01:05.210-06:002016-09-12T22:01:05.210-06:00The first two lines have 11 syllables... and in li...The first two lines have 11 syllables... and in line 11 the iambic pentameter is off. The first syllable is stressed in "human." Kevin Dormanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11741301834210005511noreply@blogger.com