tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8821350472422810239.post5363607355763678568..comments2023-05-19T08:51:23.931-06:00Comments on Smartphone Shakespeare: McKay's Annotated Bibliography (1)Gideonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13328578010572353558noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8821350472422810239.post-88935098484792166492016-11-15T09:06:03.597-07:002016-11-15T09:06:03.597-07:00Garrett and Stella are right -- hope you can bring...Garrett and Stella are right -- hope you can bring some clarity to your claim. Your sources have strong coherence and could really help you ground your claim. Consider including a section in which you introduce Roman philosophy (at least the part dealing with destiny/fate). Gideon Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08282494104976426309noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8821350472422810239.post-53827462140616439022016-11-15T01:42:07.470-07:002016-11-15T01:42:07.470-07:00Maybe some sort of back up evidence as to why the ...Maybe some sort of back up evidence as to why the fate and destiny cause doubt to come upon the assassination would make it a stronger thesis? Otherwise, it seems like you've found some strong sources. I like the one that mentions the supernatural!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07291231555559499865noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8821350472422810239.post-50668778023677985002016-11-14T23:26:31.630-07:002016-11-14T23:26:31.630-07:00I'm just a little confused by your thesis stat...I'm just a little confused by your thesis statement. How do the lenses of fate and destiny change how we perceive the assassination? Like what kind of doubt? I haven't read that play but I'm genuinely interested in hearing how fate and destiny complicate the assassination!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08926059428689091657noreply@blogger.com