tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8821350472422810239.post7355420404289699434..comments2023-05-19T08:51:23.931-06:00Comments on Smartphone Shakespeare: Maddie's Draft SonnetGideonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13328578010572353558noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8821350472422810239.post-90003959052104365332016-09-13T03:39:23.502-06:002016-09-13T03:39:23.502-06:00I also think some punctuation could give your poem...I also think some punctuation could give your poem some clarity. I really enjoyed all the imagery, but I'm not sure what the final statement seems to be.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07291231555559499865noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8821350472422810239.post-53653330596300533242016-09-13T00:01:08.424-06:002016-09-13T00:01:08.424-06:00Line 6 I think is off in meter. And I would sugges...Line 6 I think is off in meter. And I would suggest to maybe add more punctuation? I like the theme and what you have, unless maybe you have the lack of it (punctuation) to build up the meaning of the poem? I think it sounds really good though, with or without additional punctuation!Rachel Rackhamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10708630844315031638noreply@blogger.com