Thursday, November 3, 2016

Kate's sonnet 18

Share it Please

https://youtu.be/AxVUR2t-yuY

Sorry I suppress a laugh at the end. My cat was opening the door onto me and I had to hold it close with my foot.

4 comments:

  1. The suppressed laugh just adds some character to the sonnet. I enjoyed your recitation.

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  2. Kate, I enjoyed your sonnet. My only correction would be to maybe slow it down just a titch - that way the lines flow a little bit better as well. But, all in all, good job:)

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  3. I agree with Leah, the laugh makes it more personable. Great job!

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  4. I really enjoyed this! I think you gave life to the piece.

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