Good emotion! And I liked the beginning (made me chuckle). I might change the title of your video from the lengthy assigned lettering, though!
Love the dramatic flair! I think the facial expressions made the video a lot more interesting to watch.
Why, Isaac, what a scholarly appearance....haha. I loved your introduction. I agree with Elise that your facial expressions made the video more entertaining and also led to the sonnet's ambiguity as well.