Sorry I suppress a laugh at the end. My cat was opening the door onto me and I had to hold it close with my foot.
The suppressed laugh just adds some character to the sonnet. I enjoyed your recitation.
Kate, I enjoyed your sonnet. My only correction would be to maybe slow it down just a titch - that way the lines flow a little bit better as well. But, all in all, good job:)
I agree with Leah, the laugh makes it more personable. Great job!
I really enjoyed this! I think you gave life to the piece.