I really enjoyed the way that you expressed a lot of the words and you gave it interesting inflection! The one thing I think you could have done a little better is connecting the lines. It was a little difficult for me to follow the phrases of the poem and understand it because everything wasn't always connected.
Your expression was really good, I especially enjoyed the last few lines. I agree with Leah that you could connect the phrases a little better. but overall I liked it.
I really enjoyed the way that you expressed a lot of the words and you gave it interesting inflection! The one thing I think you could have done a little better is connecting the lines. It was a little difficult for me to follow the phrases of the poem and understand it because everything wasn't always connected.
ReplyDeleteThis was good! You did so well at enunciating each word clearly. I'd agree with Leah about connecting lines a little bit, but it was awesome overall!
ReplyDeleteYour expression was really good, I especially enjoyed the last few lines. I agree with Leah that you could connect the phrases a little better. but overall I liked it.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your tone - you kept it very soft overall and it made it more dramatic (subtle but dramatic).
ReplyDeleteThis sounds professional. I love it! Great job.
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