Eat your hearts out.
I love how much attitude you put into it! The way you said "him, him" made me smile. You really put a fun spin on it.
Wow. You should be an actress! I loved the freedom you felt to move around and the emphasis you put on different words. Your emphasis of "my" and "me" gave more meaning to the poem itself.
Excellent work! I love how animated you made your recitation, which really brought it to life!