I really liked this recitation! You could have slowed it down a little, so we could really feel the impact of the words, but overall good job!
A little bit dim on the lighting, but I really like how you "pop" certain words. It adds to the emotion and flow!
I think it was great! You gave a great performance. It was a little dark buy not a big deal. Great work!
I thought that your phrasing was really nice! You clearly articulated each word and added emphasis to those that needed it. Great job!