Awesome that you were able to get the sonnet very exact, I wish a little more emotion had gone into it, but it can be difficult, try saying it like you talking to someone versus reading it off of your mental page.
I thought you really got the iambic pentameter down, and your memorization was really great. My only quibble was it was a wee bit fast and you could've ennunciated more. Otherwise nice job!
I liked your tone, and facial expressions, it gave the poem a different feel, less emotive and more intellectual which I enjoyed. Christopher's suggestion is pretty good, you might want to slow down a little.
Awesome that you were able to get the sonnet very exact, I wish a little more emotion had gone into it, but it can be difficult, try saying it like you talking to someone versus reading it off of your mental page.
ReplyDeleteI thought you really got the iambic pentameter down, and your memorization was really great. My only quibble was it was a wee bit fast and you could've ennunciated more. Otherwise nice job!
ReplyDeleteThat'sprobably true about saying it slower. I've just said it so manytimes that I stopped paying attention as much to annunciation.
DeleteI liked your tone, and facial expressions, it gave the poem a different feel, less emotive and more intellectual which I enjoyed. Christopher's suggestion is pretty good, you might want to slow down a little.
ReplyDeleteThanks. I felt like it was more of a argument about love than the expression of it that guides most reading.
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