Awesome that you were able to get the sonnet very exact, I wish a little more emotion had gone into it, but it can be difficult, try saying it like you talking to someone versus reading it off of your mental page.
I thought you really got the iambic pentameter down, and your memorization was really great. My only quibble was it was a wee bit fast and you could've ennunciated more. Otherwise nice job!
That'sprobably true about saying it slower. I've just said it so manytimes that I stopped paying attention as much to annunciation.
I liked your tone, and facial expressions, it gave the poem a different feel, less emotive and more intellectual which I enjoyed. Christopher's suggestion is pretty good, you might want to slow down a little.
Thanks. I felt like it was more of a argument about love than the expression of it that guides most reading.