Haha I can relate too well to recording your video way too many times. You did a great job memorizing your sonnet!
It sounds like that one would have been hard for me to memorize. Great job at making it almost seamless.
Wow, you rattled that thing off, no problem! Looks like the 18 tries were worth it.
Don't worry your not alone, it took me quite a few attempts to get mine to! and it turned out all right in the end, I like how you made the lines flow into each other.
You enunciated your words very well; the only correction I'd give would be to connect the phrases a little bit more.