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When I look at the writings of old I impressed with the beauty they write of and the beauty of what they wrote. Looking at you, I see that they would have been able to aptly describe your beauty. You could be the one they were talking about, it could all be a tribute to you. Too bad, because our generation couldn't do you justice. They just don't have the skill.
- lack a real "volta" or turn in the theme
- plays on the familiar subjects of beauty, time and celebration of the human body
- use of lists to over emphasize a point
- time once again kind of a cruel melancholy overseer